Saturday, 24 February 2018

Tips to prepare Notes and Summary:


Tips to prepare Notes and Summary:

 Prepare notes using phrases only and never use complete sentences.

 The topic sentence of each paragraph is the main point and the ideas affiliated to

it are the sub-points – one or more depending on the concepts in the paragraph.

Sub points should be limited to five.

 Each sub-point may or may not have supplementary ideas which become subsub points.

 Proper indentation is essential.

 Provide an appropriate title for the notes and the summary.

 Include a minimum of 4 to 6 distinctly different, recognizable short forms of the

Longer Words (abbreviations) in the notes.

 Underline all short forms. Provide the key for the short forms at the end of the

notes titled ‘Key to Abbreviations’.

 Cover all the important points in the passage while preparing the notes.

 Identify and club similar ideas scattered in different paragraphs/areas of the

Passage before subtitling paragraph wise to make note short and precise.

Do proper indentation . You may use symbols & figures also for abbreviation.

 Include all the important points in the notes meaningfully to prepare the

summary in about 80

 Write the summary in complete sentences in a paragraph with a suitable title.

Split up of Marks

Note making (5) Summary (3)

Title: 1              Content: 3      Key to Abbreviations: 1

Content: 2 Expression: 1


Passage for Note Making (Solved)

 2. Read the passage given below carefully and answer the questions that follow: (8)

 1. The small village of Somnathpur contains an extraordinary temple, built around 1268 A.D. by the Hoyasalas of Karnataka – one of the most prolific temple-builders. Belur and Helebid are among their better-known works. While these suffered during the invasions of the 14th century, the Somnathpur temple stands more or less intact in near-original condition.

2.  This small temple captivates with the beauty and vitality of its detailed sculpture, covering almost every inch of the walls, pillars and even ceilings. It has three shikharas and stands on a star-shaped, raised platform with 24 edges. The outer walls have a profusion of detailed carvings: the entire surface run over by carved plaques of stone. There were vertical panels covered by exquisite figures of gods and goddesses with many incarnations being depicted. 

There were nymphs too, some carrying an ear of maize a symbol of plenty and prosperity. The elaborate ornamentation, very characteristic of Hoyasala sculptures, was a remarkable feature. On closer look- and it is worth it – the series of friezes on the outer walls revealed intricately carved caparisoned (covered decorative cloth) elephants, charging horsemen, stylized flowers, warriors, musicians, crocodiles, and swans.

 3. The temple was actually commissioned by Soma Dandanayaka or Somnath (he named the
village after himself), the minister of the Hoyasala king, Narasimha, the Third. The temple was built to house three versions of Krishna.

 4. The inner center of the temple was the kalyana mandapa. Leading from here were three
corridors each ending in a shrine, one for each kind of Krishna – Venugopala, Janardana and
Prasanna Keshava, though only two remain in their original form. In the darkness of the
sanctum sanctorum, I tried to discern the different images. The temple’s sculptural perfection is amazing and it includes the doors of the temple and the three elegantly carved towers.

 2.1. On the basis of your reading of the above passage make notes on it using headings
and sub-headings. Use recognizable abbreviations, wherever necessary. Give the passage a suitable title.                                                                                                                                                  5

 Temple of Somnathpur

 1. Temple: the beauty and vitality

1.1. Detailed sculpture – covering walls, pillars, ceilings

1.1. a. Series of friezes on outer walls

1.1. b. intricately carved elephants

1.1. c. charging horsemen

1.1. d. stylized flowers

1.1. e. warriors, musicians, crocodile and swans

1.2. three shikharas – stands *shaped, raised platform – 24 edges

1.3. the outer walls – detailed carvings

1.4. the entire surface – carved plaques of stone

1.5. vertical panels covered by exq. fig.

 2. Representation of Hinduism

2.1. incarnations

2.2. many deities

3. Temple in the History

3.1. comsnd. Soma Dandanayaka or Somnath

3.2. the inner center of the temple – kalyana mandapa

3.3. three corridors ending in a shrine

 Key to Abbreviations

1. * star

2. exq exquisite

3. fig figures

4. comsnd. commissioned

2.2. Write a summary of the note prepared in not more than 80 words. (3  

                marks) 

                                     Temple of Somnathpur

The temple of Somnathpur is extraordinary due to the sculptures on the walls,
pillars, and even the ceiling which is covered by exquisite figures of gods and
goddesses. It is a representation of Hinduism with its many incarnations and
deities. The temple commissioned by Somnath has a ‘kalyana mandapa’ with three     

                    corridors ending in a shrine.

Invitations and Replies:


Invitations and Replies: (50 Words 5 Marks)

No man is an island. Man is a social animal. We need to be with people. This is the reason why solitary confinement is the worst form of punishment one can experience. So, we celebrate many occasions together. To invite someone for an occasion we use the written form-INVITATION.

 Invitations are generally printed cards through which we invite our guests on some auspicious occasion like wedding, birthday, wedding anniversary, house warming, inauguration of a shop/factory etc.

Invitations are of two types: (a) Formal (b) Informal. They can be printed on cards or can be

drafted in the form of letters.

MAIN CHARACTERISTICS

An invitation is complete information. It answers the questions: who, whom, when, where, what time and for what. The important components of an invitation therefore are:-

o The occasion

o Name(s) of the invitee(s)

Name(s) of the host(s)

o Date, time and venue

o Name(s) of the chief guest or special invitees , in case of an official invitation

 FORMAT OF FORMAL INVITATIONS

In case of formal invitations, each of the following is written in a separate line with fonts of

varying sizes.

· Names of the hosts

· Names of the invitee (in case of a formal letter of invitation))

· Formal phrase of invitation , for example :-

Request the pleasure of your benign presence/company.

Seek your auspicious presence.

Solicit your gracious presence on the auspicious occasion

· The date, time and venue of the event.

· The occasion/reason of the invitation

 CHARACTERISTICS OF FORMAL INVITATIONS

1.Meant for a lot of invitees

· These are written in the third person.

· In case a VIP is invited as the chief guest the name of the VIP must appear prominently.

· Name of the invitee is not to be included. The addressee’s address is to be written only

on the envelope.

· Simple Present Tense is to be used.The date of writing is not to be given.

· There is no signature of the host.

· The abbreviation RSVP (French : repondez s’il vous plait ) i.e. ‘please reply’ is

written below on the left with name(s)/ address &phone number of the host(s)

· Put the invitation in a box & follow word limit.


1.Meant for an individual (a formal letter of invitation)

* Include the name of the invitee

· These are to be written on run-on lines. The sentence is not broken into different

words/phrases.

                 · Other details are similar to the mass-scale invitations

                        EXAMPLES OF FORMAL INVITATIONS

 1.Your father, Mr. Raj Kumar Gupta , residing at K-18 ,13th Cross Malleswaram, Bangalore wants to celebrate the success of your brother Rohith’s clearing the IIT-JEE Entrance Examination and  securing admission in IIT Powai ,Mumbai. He wants you to draft a formal invitation for him on his behalf. Draft the invitation for him in not more than 50 words.

                         Mrs. And Mr. Raj Kumar Gupta

                           Seek your auspicious presence

                         at the Grand Celebration Party

                  of their son Rohit’s successfully passing the

                            IIT-JEE ENTRANCE EXAMINATION                                                         

                            at 8.00 p.m. on 1st October, 2012

                                                               at                                                                                          

                              UTSAV BANQUET HALL

                           84-Dr. Raj Kumar, Road, Rajaji Nagar

                                              Bangalore-55
                      Compliments from Friends and Relatives
                   RSVP

                       k-18, 13th Cross ,Malleswaram

                       2712001/9732966964

Your school, Bal Peeth Residential School, Bellary is planning to organize the Annual
Sports Day in the school premises. Draft an invitation in not more than 50 words giving
all the essential details.
                The Principal ,Staff and Students
                                                of
                    Bal Peeth Residential School , Bellary
                        request the pleasure of your company on
                              ANNUAL SPORTS DAY
                          at 5.00 p.m. on Monday , the 4th Nov.,2012
                                        at the school ground.
                         Air Marshal S.K.Sinha , AVSM,
                           has kindly consented to be the chief guest
                                             &
                                   Smt. Radha Sinha
                           has graciously consented to give away the prizes
                
                         RSVP
                        2354679
  
                              FORMAL INVITATION-LETTER FORMAT



Kamala Nehru School
Cantonment
Bangalore
25th Nov 2012
Mr. K.J. Singh
DCP
Police Lines
Bangalore
Sub: Invitation: School Annual Day Function
Sir
It gives us immense pleasure to inform you that we are celebrating our school’s 25th
Annual Day at 5.30 p.m. on Dec. 10, 2012. in the School Auditorium. We shall consider it a great honour if you could grace the occasion as the Chief Guest, preside over the function and give away the prizes.
Yours faithfully
Sd/-
    B- WRITING INFORMAL INVITATIONS
Informal:-
*Written in a letter form, in informal format. Such letters are very persuasive in nature
*Written in the first person *Salutation is ‘dear + name’
*Complimentary close ‘yours sincerely’ *Date of writing the invitation is given
*The sender’s address appears on the left hand side
*Various tenses used to suit the sense.
Value Points:
Format - 1 Mark
Content Relevance - name of the person(s) who is inviting; the invitee, date, day, chief, guest place Occasion etc. - 2 marks
Expression - Grammatical accuracy, Language - 2 marks
REPLIES – FORMAL: Accepting or Declining
-follow a set formula -formal words — kind invitation’, ‘great pleasure’, ‘regret’ etc.
-Use the third person (‘they’) instead of first person (‘I’, we’)
- The address of the writer and the date to be written.
Informal - Accepting and declining -Like an ordinary letter
Do not use only informal words and expressions -use the first person (‘I’, ‘We’)
SOLVED EXAMPLES
Look at the following series of invitations (formal & informal) and their replies. The
                   occasion is the same but the style is different.



VISTAS AT A GLANCE –PART I


VISTAS AT A GLANCE –PART I ( LAST MIN PREP)


 THE ENEMY BY PEARL S BUCK


• Character Sketch of Sadao

– Dedicated surgeon and doctor, has fellow feeling and kindness for

people in distress

– Conflict between duty as a doctor and duty as a Japanese

– prejudiced against the white man, afraid of being called a traitor

– Shelters the enemy and saves his life.

– Out of loyalty to his country, informs the General

– helps the white man escape

• Character Sketch of Hana

– Balanced woman, stands with her husband

– Responsible - washes prisoner, treats him respectfully

– Dignified and graceful about servants leaving the house

– helped Sadao in the operation

– administers anesthesia to the prisoner

• American Soldier – Tom

– Hardly 17, taken prisoner

– Escaped, but shot at the back

– suffered torture and hunger

– Wounded, bleeding was in great pain, lay unconscious

– Strong will-power

– Full of gratitude towards Dr. Sadao

• The General

– Selfish, thinks of only his treatment

– had faith in Sadao’s skill as a doctor

– Promises to send private assassins to get rid of the prisoner

– Careless – forgot to send assassins

• Reaction of Servants

– Don’t agree with the idea of helping an enemy

– Yumi refused to wash the white man

– Gardener felt Sadao should have let the soldier die

– Thought sea and gods would take revenge if Sadao saved the

soldier

– felt Sadao was proud of his skill and used it irresponsibly

– left the house till the time the prisoner stayed there.

• How Sadao helped the soldier escape

– Put food and extra clothing in the boat.

– Directed him to row to an uninhabited island

– Asked him to wait for a Korean fishing boat

– Told him to catch fish but eat it raw

– Gave him his flash light

– Told him to flash the torch twice if food ran out and one flash if he was all right

– Gave him Japanese clothes and covered his hair with a black

cloth.


SHORT ANSWER TYPE QUESTIONS


Answer the following questions in about 30-40 words each. (2 Markseach)

1. Why did Sadao wait before falling in love with Hana?

2. Give two reasons why Sadao was not sent abroad with the troops.

3. What do you learn about Sadao’s father from the story ‘The Enemy’?

4. In which condition did Sadao and Hana find the man? How did they

est1ablish his identity?

5. What superstitious beliefs of the servants made them oppose Sadao’s

decision to give shelter to the injured man?

6. Why did Sadao decide to treat the injured man?

7. What did the servants think about Sadao’s sheltering an enemy?

8. What message did the messenger from the palace deliver to Dr. Sadao?

9. How did Hana react to the servants leaving the house?

10. What plan did the General suggest to get rid of the prisoner?

11. Why couldn’t the General’s plan of eliminating the prisoner succeed?

12. What things did Sadao provide for the wounded prisoner on the boat?

LONG ANSWER TYPE QUESTIONS

Answer the following in 125-150 words. (7 Marks each)

1. Dr. Sadao and Hana rise above man made divisions to serve the nobler

cause of humanity. Discuss with reference to the story.

2. What efforts were made by Dr. Sadao and Hana to save the life of the

injured man?

3. Hana plays an instrumental role in saving the life of the injured prisoner.

Give an account of her role in the light of this statement.

4. How did the servant’s react to the efforts made by Sadao and Hana to

save the prisoner’s life?

5. What conflict of duties does Dr. Sadao f ace? How does he resolve

them?

SHOULD WIZARD HIT MOMMY BY JOHN UPDIKE

• Jack’s Story Telling

– Began two years ago

– to tell stories in the evening for the Sunday naps

– Story telling very tiresome

– no longer takes everything as true

– growing up and questions everything.

• The Story

– a basic story line and a few characters

– the main character – a small creature

– usually named Roger

– when in trouble Roger goes to wise owl

– owl sends him to the wizard

– wizard finally solves the problem

• Roger Skunk’s Story

– smelled very bad

– no one wants to play with him

– teased and called stinky skunk

– meets the owl and tells his story

– owl asks him to meet the wizard

– the wizard asks for 7 pennies

– he had 4 and took 3 from magic wall

– changed his smell like roses

– Friends were happy and want to play with

– But his mother didn’t like his smell

– became angry and took him back to wizard

– ordered to change back to his original smell

– once again smelled very bad

• Jo’s Opinion About the Ending

– not likes the end of the story

– wants to see her character happy

– not wants to smell bad once again

– not likes mommy’s interference

– wants her dad to change the ending

– wants dad to make the wizard hit her

– not convinced at her father’s saying that his mother loved him as

he smelled like her baby

– Jo wants his mommy to understand how his friends used to tease

him and not to play with.

SHORT ANSWER TYPE QUESTIONS

Answer the following in about 30-40 words each. (2 Marks each)

1. What made Jack realize that the custom of telling his daughter a story, had

turned futile?

2. What was unique about the story that Jack told?

3. How did the wizard solve as well as create problem for Roger?

4. What was the cause of Roger Skunk’s sadness?

5. What change occurred in the attitude of other animals when the smell of

Roger Skunk changed.

6. How did Roger Skunk’s mother react to his newly acquired smell?

7. Did Jo accept the violence of Roger Skunk’s mother to the wizard? What

did she want?

8. Jo is no longer a passive listener to Jack’s stories. How?

9. How does Jack justify his ending of the story?

10. Why does Jo want a different ending to the story?


LONG ANSWER TYPE QUESTIONS


Answer the following in 125-150 words. (7 Marks each)

1. Why does Jo want the wizard to hit mommy? Discuss with reference to the

text.

2. Adults should not impose their perspective on kids. Do you agree? Give

a reasoned answer.

3. Bring out the moral issues raised in the story.

4. Jack’s handling of the ending of his story projects him in a poor light as

a father. Do you agree? Why? Why not?


ON THE FACE OF IT BY SUSAN HILL

• Mr. Lamb Welcomes Derry

– in his garden in spite of jumping over the wall

– tries to make him comfortable

– tells him to pick crab apples

– talks to him, without considering his disability

– Derry thinks, pretending not to be afraid of his burnt face

– tells usually people afraid of his face

– Mr. Lamb asks but doesn’t probe

– tells Derry that he has a tin leg

• Mr. Lamb’s advice to Derry

– tells that in Nature shapes differ but quality is the same

– no difference among the plants whether they are weeds, flowers

and others all grow

– inside is important than outside

– accept yourself, not to fear others’ comments.

– calling Lamey-Lamb not bother him

– not to keep thinking of these things

– life offers many more things

– isolation not good

– inspires to look at thing positively

• Derry’s reaction to Mr. Lamb’s advice

– initially, very suspicious of Mr. Lamb

– never had anybody to talk to and understand

– not believe that he does not find him ugly

– later, fascinated by Mr. Lamb’s talk

– motivated and drawn towards him

• Mr. Lamb

– an old man with a tin leg

– lives alone, lonely

– found ways to overcome his loneliness

– keeps his gate open

– never curtains his windows

– imagines kids and people walking all over

– spends time listening to the bees

– has a positive approach to life

• Derry’s Transformation

– had bitter experience in the world

– tells Mr. Lamb about sarcastic comments about his looks

– Even his mother kisses on the other side of face

– not trust people and ignore their comments about his face

– sad that he will have only half a face

– Mr. Lamb’s meeting changes his outlook towards life

– talks to Mr. Lamb about his likes, dislikes and fears

– wants to be loved and appreciated

– wants to break free from the stigma of being disabled

– his going back to Mr. Lamb’s garden shows his changing

personality.

LONG ANSWER TYPE QUESTIONS

Answer the following in 30-40 words each. (2 Marks each)

1. How does Derry enter the garden? What had he thought about it?

2. What had happened to Derry’s face? How do people react when they look at it?

3. What does Mr. Lamb say about weeds and flowers?

4. What did Mr. Lamb tell Derry about his handicap?

5. Why did children call Mr. Lamb ‘Lamey Lamb’?

6. How does Mr. Lamb convince Derry of the uselessness of being a recluse

(Lonely Person)?

7. How does Mr. Lamb spend his time?

8. What did Derry overhear his parents talking about his future? How did this affect him?

9. Why does Mr. Lamb advise Derry to stop having feelings of hatred towards the people?

10. What draws Derry to Mr. Lamb?

11. What did Derry hear the woman at the bus stop say?

12. How is Mr. Lamb’s concept of a ‘friend’ different from that of Derry’s?

13. What, according to Derry, would happen if Mr. Lamb continued his friendship with him?

14. Why is not Mr. Lamb troubled by the people who stare at him?

15. Why were there no curtains in Mr. Lamb’s house?

16. Why did Derry want to go back to Mr. Lamb’s garden?

17. Why does Derry’s mother object to his going to Mr. Lamb’s house?

18. Give reasons to show that Derry is a changed person at the end of the play.

LONG ANSWER TYPE QUESTIONS

Answer the following in 125-150 words. (7 Marks each)

1. The play ends on a tragic note but reaffirms hope. Discuss with reference to the text.

2. Despite his show of Bravado, Mr. Lamb is a lonely man. Do you agree? Give a reasoned answer.

3. How is Mr. Lamb successful in infusing Derry with a zest for living?

4. Derry suffers from a sense of insecurity and alienation. Comment.

EVANS TRIES AN O LEVEL BY COLIN DEXTER

• Evans tries an O-Level

– James Roderick Evans – a prisoner

– earlier escaped thrice from the prison

– therefore titled ‘Evans the Break’

– started night classes in O-Level German

– Govt. arranged to examine Evans for O-Level in his prison cell

– On the exam day he was given time to smarten up

– Unshaven and having a filthy looking hat

– refused to remove the cap that’s lucky

• Examination Arrangements

– removal of razors and nail scissors

– set tables opposite each other and placed two hard chairs in the

cell

– deputed Stephens on D-Wing and newly recruited to visit Evans’

prison

– invigilator Mc Leery left his house at 8:45 am as the exam was to

begin at 9:15 am.

– Mc Lerry came, having a brown suitcase, semi-inflated rubber ring,

needed for haemorrhoids?

• The Exam Begins

– asked Evans to write index No., centre No, 313 and 271

– at 9:40 a.m. Mc Leery asked for correction slip

– Evans hardly understood anything, kept his pen between lips and

staring towards the door.

– at 10:15 Evans requested for a blanket

– The exam got over at 11:20

– Hearing the Governor’s order at 11:22 a.m. accompanied McLeery

to the prison gate

– Stephens obeyed the orders

– On the way asked Mcleery about Evans

– McLeery’s answer made him feel, his broader scots accent, to be

slimmer due to long black overcoat.

• Evans Escapes

– After seeing McLeery off, wanted to go for coffee, must take one

last look at Evans

– he saw McLeery sprawled in Evan’s chair slipping the blanket and

blood dripping through the beard.

– instead of calling ambulance McLeery low moaned and asked for

police to call

– he knew where Evans was

– opened the German Q. Paper and found a photocopied sheet

carefully and cleverly super imposed over the last page of Q. Paper

– instructions and the plan written in German as Make your way to

Neugraben

– Governor was furious, not made any call to see off McLeery at the

prison gate

– Governor wanted to know about the false beared, spectacles and

other things

– Later the Governor was puzzled Mcleery was not in the hospital

– The ambulance sent to Elsfield to pick, Mc Leery but just vanished

– after a quarter and half an hour they found McLeery bound and

Gagged

– Now they understood it was not Evans impersonating as McLeery

who had walked out but it was Evans, impersonating Mc Leery

who stayed in

• Final Escape

– reached his hotel at Golden Lion

– very happy for his successful plan

– able to hide his closely cropped hair due to lucky hat

– as he reached the reception, found the receptionist not the same

girl

– collected the keys, asked for early morning call at 6.45 am.

– as entered the room, shocked to see the Governor sitting on the

narrow bed

– finally spoke that was the correction slip which he left behind,

given the clue about

– Index No. 313, Centre No. 271 the six figures 313271 got him there

– Governor wanted to know where the blood came from, answered

that was pig’s blood in ring

– told about his German friend, helped him

– winked at receptionist and get back

– hand cuffed and clambered into the back seat of prison van, As he

turned right, unlocked hand cuffs and asked to drive fast

– on the driver’s query, suggested Newbury

– prison officer was Evans’ own man and the Governor was fooled

once again.

SHORT ANSWER TYPE QUESTIONS

Answer the following questions in 30-40 words each. (2 Marks each)


1.What was unusual about the request received by the examination board?

2. How is Evans not a typical criminal?

3. What is the nickname that Evans has got and why?

4. The prison authorities were not taking any chances with Evans’. What precautions did they take?

5. How did Evans convince Jackson to allow him to wear his hat?

6. What reason did McLeery give for bringing the rubber ring with him?

7. What did the governor instruct Stephens to do after the exam got over?

8. What did Stephens discover in Evans’ cell after McLeery had left?

9. Who had impersonated whom in the plan to escape?

10. Mention two changes that Stephens notices in McLeery when he was leaving after the exam?

11. How did Evans exploit the soft corner Jackson had for him?

12. How did Evans manage to procure the things that had helped him in his escape?

13. What was Evans actually doing when the pen was stuck in his mouth?

14. How did Evans manage to get blood? How was its clotting prevented?

15. How did the governor manage to track down Evans to the hotel where he was hiding?

16. How is Evans able to manage his escape in the absence of visitors and letters?

17. Why did Evans leave the question paper with German written on it in the cell?

18. How did the correction slip help in Evan’s escape?

19. What fate did the real McLeery meet?

20. How did Evans manage to give a slip to the governor at the end?

LONG ANSWER TYPE QUESTIONS

Answer the following in about 125-150 words. (7 Marks each)

1. What steps were taken by the prison authorities to prevent any escape attempt by Evans?

2. How was Evans able to turn the table on his captors?

3. “The Governor was just another, good for a giggle, gullible governor.” Do you agree? Give a reasoned answer.



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